1) One thing I liked in my essay was the first few sentences of the whole paper. I felt they served as a fairly effective hook to make readers interested.
2) If i had another day, I would focus on changing the length of some of my sentences. There aer a few run ons i have noticed and i would have liked to change those into a couple shorter sentences instead.
3) One important thing I learned from this essay was to write a good hook. I hadnt realized the importance of grabbing the reader's attention early with an extraordinary or interesting statement at the begininning of the paper. Another important thing I learned from this assignment was how to make good descriptions; applying to the senses and staying on topic etc.
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