-Essays for my reflective letter: #2 & #3
-Strengths shown in essay #2:
*Solid hook---grabs reader’s attention
*Paragraphs support thesis and do not stray away from it
*A conclusion that really brings my paper to a close
-Strengths shown in Essay #3
*Sentence length variation, nice mixture of long/short sentences
*Used good word choice to purvey powerful thoughts and ideas
*Once again the hook grabs attention of reader
-Weaknesses in Essay #2
*I feel I could have transitioned between paragraphs better
*Over-use of commas resulting in too long or run on sentences
Weaknesses in Essay #3
*Length of paper—short of req. by a few paragraphs.
*Organization of my thoughts and points
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